Wednesday, September 14, 2005

Lost love Haiku

Bright eyes and big lashes
Liquid pools alive with a sparkle
A forlorn hopelessness.

- A vain attempt at Haiku

5 comments:

lalit said...

Reads Haiku
Thinks it's lame
Goes for quick lunch

;)

Ajay said...

:-)

Anonymous said...

Nice thought, but I am sorry to say that any random 3 sentences cannot be called a haiku. A haiku has a strict 5-7-5 syllable scheme.

Ajay said...

A vain attempt, I'm sad to conclude.

scrubs said...

who is she?have u told ur mom?-just joking!!!